Blood Red Moon

Blood Red Moon

Deep devouring passions bleed now from this solar eclipse 
As black blood flows from an evil army of “undead” beings 
Whose fangs hideously and cruelly pierce the veins of their 
Mesmerized and unsuspecting victims who are held at bay.

In such silence burdens prowl inside deep sad heartbeats 
As ghastly living shadows creep eerily in and knot the 
Tortured guts of a twisted scared bloodless life falling 
Under the dark macabre gaze of the Blood Red Moon.

At night uncanny black magic spells are intoned in the 
Old Latin scripture as large spider webs cast a gloomy 
Presence and envelope now all those trapped by them as 
The misted breath bleeding hearts howl to Heaven’s roar. 

Standing upon a rugged and lonely mountain crossroad 
There can be no release from the devilish glare of the
Vaunted “Blood Red Moon” whose evil presence pervades
Every breath you take and casts a demonic derisive stare.

My senses are now frozen in place as a deep chill shakes
My soul to the very core of its primordial existence as I 
React to the cutting cold of a dawning maleficent darkness 
Invading every corner and space of my psyche and existence.

The wicked jaws of a rabid beast seek now to bite and rip
All beauty from me and all thoughts I hold close and dear 
As I gasp now for life and painfully feel my tired heartbeat 
Slow as my immortal soul numbs and cries crocodile tears. 

I’m cursed now to walk alone forever as my spilled remains 
Are cut now and my ties of human existence have disappeared 
Putting me on the ground on all fours as I ponder my ultimate
Fate in the hands of a supernatural force beyond any mercy. 
 
As the shadow of Lucifer’s Blood Red Moon passes over my
Tortured face I spy a look at one demonic siren prompting me
Now to follow her as my body is placed on a sacrificial alter
And my life ebbs away as I’m kissed by spirits of the damned!

Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid – A Collaborated Poem
Copyright © All Rights Reserved – October 11, 2015 
(Narrative Quatrain)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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November 29, 2015 at 9:59 AM
Excellent imagery picturesque haunting of a vampiric adventure
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November 1, 2015 at 12:44 PM
- Liam and Gary !!!! - FIRST CLASS POEM !!! - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)
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November 1, 2015 at 9:39 AM
Liam Mate!! Great to see a second posting of this great write for sure. I must say, it is always a pleasure for me to collaborate with you ever so often on very interesting topics that spark such creative imagination and passion. Methinks the "Leprechaun Choir" will celebrate and wash it all down with some "Irish"!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 31, 2015 at 6:21 PM
Hi Liam n' Gary!Congratulations to you both on POTW!A very outstanding collaboration here between the two of you my dearest friends.Excellent piece!Perfectly done!So beautifully written.Just awesome!I am so very happy n' proud for the both of you:)You both deserve it!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light! God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D ^O^
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 31, 2015 at 6:19 PM
Hi Liam n' Gary!Wow!This is a very outstanding,amazing,n' scary Halloween poem that you've painted here my dearest friends.An excellent Halloween poem! A masterpiece!So very beautifully written and so very dark,evil and creepy.Just the perfect poem for Halloween.Very bloody thrilling n' terrifying!It really gives me the chills reading it.Incredible imagery!Just awesome!Great collaboration!Well done!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + to each!A Fav!And very Happy Halloween from me to you too!BOO! BOO!:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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