Blood Red Gem

I spent my day shopping for rubies
searching for jewels, glittering red
love of Venus, in strawberry stones
fortune favours, that's how they said.
 
diadem of diamonds, splashes amber   
fierce blaze of fire, polished in shine
red rose pendant glowing in whims
superstellar color, garnets crystalline.
    
Here's the real ruby, in its royal scepter
pale moonlight, russet autumn shades  
crowned on this ring, an euphoric cherry?  
No, it's just a fake, the tint masquerades.
 
Her wedding dress of red silk brocade, 
poppies and buttercups sewn to the hem.
A matching ruby to flicker a misaligned fate, 
a hardened heart buys, the blood red gem.




19th July 2020



Sponsor	Julia Ward
Contest Name	First Line Prompt - 3 |
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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La France Avatar
February 20, 2021 at 8:46 AM
Debjani, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest with this wonderfully penned poem _Constance
Mitra Avatar
February 19, 2021 at 6:13 PM
Wow....I always thought of Rubies in a similar way.....Congrats on your win Debjani :)
Agustin Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 7:23 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
Ward Avatar
July 29, 2020 at 2:46 AM
Very good, but leave out the comma on the last line, please.
Mishra Avatar
July 28, 2020 at 2:01 PM
Your muse leaves me spellbound with that description of wavering emotions for the blood red gem to be bought. Congratulations on your win! Blessings and love :)
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