Blood Red

blood red a sunrise torching a tree… shade holds the fleeing night watching 5/6/2019 Writing Challenge 1, May 2019 – Cinqku – Poetry Contest Dear Heart sponsor

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/8/2019 3:22:00 AM

- A beautiful picture, enjoy your writing John :)- Winner wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/6/2019 8:02:00 PM

Spectacular. Ignites the page! A winner for me :) good luck!

John Lawless
Date: 5/7/2019 7:07:00 AM

thanks Mo, always appreciate your input...

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/6/2019 6:48:00 PM

Wow! Your poem is dynamic and dramatic, John. Gorgeous imagery and a fav. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan

Susan Ashley
Date: 5/7/2019 8:16:00 AM

Oh yes! We have a red maple too and you captured it’s sunlit fire perfectly.

John Lawless
Date: 5/7/2019 7:06:00 AM

Thank you Susan, there is a large red maple behind our house that catches the sunrise.....