John Lawless Poet Cinqku

Blood Red

blood red
a sunrise
torching a tree…
		     shade  holds the fleeing night
						               watching



5/6/2019

Writing Challenge 1, May 2019 – Cinqku – Poetry Contest
Dear Heart sponsor

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Anne-Lise Andresen May 8, 2019 at 3:22 AM - A beautiful picture, enjoy your writing John :)- Winner wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 6, 2019 at 8:02 PM Spectacular. Ignites the page! A winner for me :) good luck! John Lawless May 7, 2019 at 7:07 AM thanks Mo, always appreciate your input...

Susan Ashley May 6, 2019 at 6:48 PM Wow! Your poem is dynamic and dramatic, John. Gorgeous imagery and a fav. Best wishes for a win! ~Susan Susan Ashley May 7, 2019 at 8:16 AM Oh yes! We have a red maple too and you captured it’s sunlit fire perfectly. John Lawless May 7, 2019 at 7:06 AM Thank you Susan, there is a large red maple behind our house that catches the sunrise.....