Blood Raining

TO AL COME WITH OPEN MIND,
                        EVERYDAY HEARING OF ARE CHILDREN
                         GETTING SHOT,HEART'S FILLED WITH DARKEST,
                         SORROW,PAIN THOSE NO HOPE,THOSE WHOM 
                           CAN'T COPE,EVERY MOMENT WE STAND BACK,
                             ARE SOLDIER'S COMMITING SUICIDE BECAUSE
                               WAR TO HARD THEN BEING PUSHED,JUSTAS THE 
                                   CHILDREN BRING PRESSURED.WE WANT CHANGE,
                                    SO DO THE SOLDIER'S,CHILDREN,PEOPLE THINGING
                                      NO HOPE.ATRACE OF OUR HEART'S, SOUL'S. FAITH.
                                        THE WILL TO KEEP ALL OF THIS ALIVE1
                                            TO EVERYONE IS A PRICELESS GIFT
                                                                INSIDE ALL...................
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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January 22, 2013 at 6:03 AM
A dramatic poem, Maria. - I have never experienced war, but think it must be a terrible experience. - I've posted an S-mail to you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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