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Blood Rain

Feelings some less defying and unexplained Death takes order without complain Over pastures falls blood rain Pleads to surrender seize and refrain Graves spread out over plains World of grief bound and chained Humanity differs until the stronger remains Watching powerless as the world is strained Bodies of the defeated lay lifeless and drained Blankets lay over them soaked and blood stained Leaving now the mourning from the down pour of blood rain

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/30/2008 6:49:00 AM
Colleen - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/12/2008 4:18:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals Colleen. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/11/2008 8:35:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/4/2008 11:25:00 PM
Colleen - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 8/25/2008 1:58:00 PM
Congratulations Colleen on your featured write of the week. Disturbing subject well expressed. Love, Shar
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Date: 8/25/2008 8:28:00 AM
Congratulations Colleen on the featuring of "Blood Rain." Vince
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Date: 8/24/2008 6:57:00 PM
Colleen - Very sad and moving poem - congrats on the feature
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