Blood Moon

The mighty sun frowned upon her light
She was a blood moon today
Red and molten she glowed
Painted with the dying embers of his light!

29.5.2021
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
Contest: Bite Size Poem 3
Third Place
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Goldsmith Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 11:19 AM
Congratulations on your win. Love your blood moon write. I have seen them, so pretty. Have a blessed day..............
Mitra Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 6:32 PM
Thank you Paula....yes they are beautiful...much love :)
Kauffman Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 9:20 AM
So descriptive and full of vivid imagery Carol. Well done in four lines. Congratulations to you and blessings! :D"
Mitra Avatar
June 2, 2021 at 6:31 PM
Thanks Sam....Sometimes to say less is more....I was just awe struck :)
Johnson Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 4:36 AM
Hi, Carol. We both experienced the Red Moon. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing. Curtis
Mitra Avatar
May 31, 2021 at 5:08 AM
Thanks curtis....the moon is a Topic close to my heart....And to see a Blood moon was the best thing ever.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 6:10 AM
Vivid and flowing image in brevity.
Mitra Avatar
May 30, 2021 at 5:52 PM
Thanks dear Subimal....take care :)
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 29, 2021 at 6:10 AM
Vivid and flowing image in brevity.
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