Blood Moon

The mighty sun frowned upon her light She was a blood moon today Red and molten she glowed Painted with the dying embers of his light! 29.5.2021 Sponsor: Line Gauthier Contest: Bite Size Poem 3 Third Place

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 6/2/2021 11:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Love your blood moon write. I have seen them, so pretty. Have a blessed day..............

Carol Mitra
Date: 6/2/2021 6:32:00 PM

Thank you Paula....yes they are beautiful...much love :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/2/2021 9:20:00 AM

So descriptive and full of vivid imagery Carol. Well done in four lines. Congratulations to you and blessings! :D"

Carol Mitra
Date: 6/2/2021 6:31:00 PM

Thanks Sam....Sometimes to say less is more....I was just awe struck :)

Curtis Johnson

Date: 5/31/2021 4:36:00 AM

Hi, Carol. We both experienced the Red Moon. Nice poem. Thanks for sharing. Curtis

Carol Mitra
Date: 5/31/2021 5:08:00 AM

Thanks curtis....the moon is a Topic close to my heart....And to see a Blood moon was the best thing ever.

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 5/29/2021 6:10:00 AM

Vivid and flowing image in brevity.

Carol Mitra
Date: 5/30/2021 5:52:00 PM

Thanks dear Subimal....take care :)

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 5/29/2021 6:10:00 AM

Vivid and flowing image in brevity.