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Blood Lust

Thirsty my love?
Drink all of me
I just died for you














We all bleed for mankind, do we not?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Callus Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 4:05 PM
Hi Arthur....first impression when I read it was similar to Tim's...till I noted your footnote! Of course, a person can bleed for the one who s/he loves ... a total offering!! #7+ // paul
Vaso Avatar
March 14, 2015 at 8:53 PM
Thank you Paul, this was written with a few meanings.
Smith Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 11:44 PM
This reminds me of the offering of Christ's blood..... I'm not comparing you to Him.....just a similar feeling
Vaso Avatar
March 9, 2015 at 11:49 PM
Well if you wish too!!!!!! :) thanks Tim. a lot of levels here. Nice to see someone see that!
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