James Fraser Poet Rhyme

Blood Lust

Vampire vixens
Sharing their spoils
Lusting crimsons
Bodies coil
 
Fencing tongues
Caressing of flesh
Internal erectness
State of undress
 
Bodies drenched
Thirst quenched
Red flow run
Sexual scent
 
Midnight writhe
Before the dawn
Vixens of darkness
The dark ones spawn
 
Entrance he makes
Cloaked in death
To taste their blood
On his vixens breath
 
Cloak strewn
Bared and chaired
This blood lust two
Master shared
 
The dawn is near
As this threesome sleep
In their crypt 
Darkened deep
 
Two blood lust souls
Innocent no more
Lured from earths
Living floor
 
Paths chosen
No turning back
These vampire vixens
In the world of black
 
 
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Ciara Aiyana Ashley-Garn July 15, 2009 at 11:23 AM WOW! this is really good james! Vampires are very interesting, deadly, and mysterious...you put it in a way that exercises all three on top of beauty...Lovely and very imaginative! Keep on going man! Ciara=)

Charlene Bird July 6, 2009 at 10:39 AM Has someone been watching vampire movies that inspire them to write these blood curdling pieces. Always a great flow and the creativity is on que!

Sara Kendrick July 5, 2009 at 5:44 AM Not to fond of vampires but this is different. Sara

Jim Fish July 4, 2009 at 9:29 AM Oh, James; I'll bet you needed a smoke after writing this one! Great poem and stunning imagery. On an equally dark matter but different subject... the following was the first thing to pop into my mind... "'Tis a consummation devoutly to be wished." Thanks for the interlude... ~<><

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen July 4, 2009 at 6:40 AM James, you have made this story about vampires seem almost desirable... What a write this is! The world of black hot vampire vixens... This write is a wonderful imagination put to pen. You have created. Nice job. Lovingly, Dane

Sajdah Al-Riyami July 4, 2009 at 5:23 AM Oooooooo Vampirish-I really hate the book Twilight But the movie and Story is actually Wicked=) Along with harrpy Potter!

Charmaine Chircop July 4, 2009 at 4:20 AM this is passion---very talented my friend James----charma

Tiffany Julius July 4, 2009 at 4:08 AM breathlessly amazing,,,makes me hunger for more. i will surely be reading urs in the future. great write.