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Blood Lust

Vampire vixens Sharing their spoils Lusting crimsons Bodies coil Fencing tongues Caressing of flesh Internal erectness State of undress Bodies drenched Thirst quenched Red flow run Sexual scent Midnight writhe Before the dawn Vixens of darkness The dark ones spawn Entrance he makes Cloaked in death To taste their blood On his vixens breath Cloak strewn Bared and chaired This blood lust two Master shared The dawn is near As this threesome sleep In their crypt Darkened deep Two blood lust souls Innocent no more Lured from earths Living floor Paths chosen No turning back These vampire vixens In the world of black http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/myth-fantasy.php

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Ciara Aiyana Ashley-Garn

Date: 7/15/2009 11:23:00 AM

WOW! this is really good james! Vampires are very interesting, deadly, and mysterious...you put it in a way that exercises all three on top of beauty...Lovely and very imaginative! Keep on going man! Ciara=)

Charlene Bird

Date: 7/6/2009 10:39:00 AM

Has someone been watching vampire movies that inspire them to write these blood curdling pieces. Always a great flow and the creativity is on que!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/5/2009 5:44:00 AM

Not to fond of vampires but this is different. Sara

Jim Fish

Date: 7/4/2009 9:29:00 AM

Oh, James; I'll bet you needed a smoke after writing this one! Great poem and stunning imagery. On an equally dark matter but different subject... the following was the first thing to pop into my mind... "'Tis a consummation devoutly to be wished." Thanks for the interlude... ~<><

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 7/4/2009 6:40:00 AM

James, you have made this story about vampires seem almost desirable... What a write this is! The world of black hot vampire vixens... This write is a wonderful imagination put to pen. You have created. Nice job. Lovingly, Dane

Sajdah Al-Riyami

Date: 7/4/2009 5:23:00 AM

Oooooooo Vampirish-I really hate the book Twilight But the movie and Story is actually Wicked=) Along with harrpy Potter!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 7/4/2009 4:20:00 AM

this is passion---very talented my friend James----charma

Tiffany Julius

Date: 7/4/2009 4:08:00 AM

breathlessly amazing,,,makes me hunger for more. i will surely be reading urs in the future. great write.