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Blood and Water

The bitterness brims and bubbles away

As the heart that once felt love over-spills.

Leaving only burnt ashes left to stay

Betrayal hurts more, as vengeance distills.



As the heart that once felt love over-spills

Venomous asps bite down on softest flesh.

Betrayal hurts more, as vengeance distills

The surface punctures are now simply etched.



Venomous asps bite down on softest flesh

Deception manifests into such hate.

The surface punctures are now simply etched

Veins filled with poison, it's maybe too late.



Deception manifests into such hate

No antidote, only suffering pride.

Veins filled with poison, it maybe too late

Fighting the toxin that's built up inside.



No antidote, only suffering pride

Water disperses as, bloods thickening.

Fighting the toxin that's built up inside

So lay down and die, or wake up and win.



Water disperses as, bloods thickening

Leaving only burnt ashes left to stay.

Don’t lay down and die, just wake up and win

As bitterness brims and bubbles away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/25/2017 10:51:00 AM
Simply beautiful poetry Lorna...welcome
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Lorna Caizley
Date: 8/25/2017 8:29:00 PM
Hi Tim, thank you for your kinds words and welcome Lorna

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