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Blood

Tanis Troutman Avatar Tanis Troutman - Premium MemberPremium Member Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled Blood which was written by poet Tanis Troutman. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Blood

I can see your blood
And all the paths it takes
How fast or slow I takes
If it's bunching up in your neck
It is a stroke you can expect
When it's filling the paths hard and strong
High blood pressure is what's wrong
If you come from an exercise class
I see it flowing very fast
If it's moving fast I'm not clear
But usually I find it's because of fear
Sometimes I see things that don't belong there
Usually those people are somehow impaired
The bloods sometimes slow,
In people that are old.
I see blood, sometimes good
Sometimes bad
And that is the very super power I have



Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Date: 6/21/2016 12:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Tanis! Janice
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Date: 6/20/2016 5:26:00 PM
congrats on your 3rd place win x
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Date: 6/20/2016 12:03:00 PM
deep take on the theme Tanis congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/20/2016 2:38:00 AM
Blood coming good and bad. That is a very balanced Super Power. Congratulations.
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Date: 6/20/2016 12:09:00 AM
Tanis, this poem is so deep, so much deeper than all the other writes,that's why I selected you to be my third winner, congratulations
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