Blood

Blood inside our bodies flows
To keep our tickers ticking.
We never think about it ‘til
A problem’s up and kicking.

A tiny sample might reveal
Deficiencies or glitches,
For blood cells can’t keep secrets – 
They’re like adolescent snitches.

The needle hits a vein and then
The truth comes pouring out
To let the doctor know
What all the fuss was all about.

Amazingly, one little vial
Can give a needed clue,
Which was within us all along,
But hidden from our view.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Duncan Avatar
August 13, 2013 at 7:54 PM
nice rhyme ilene ;}
Flach Avatar
July 31, 2013 at 8:59 AM
Yeah, those adolescent snitches have saved my ass a time or two ;-). Very clever and well-rhymed. Sometimes, however, those doctors don't quite understand what the blood is trying to tell them. Some secrets will remain so for a little bit longer, I am afraid.
Johnson Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 3:42 PM
Just had mine drawn, Wish me luck. They're testing for glucose levels. Got Ice cream? :)
Jones Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 11:36 AM
Frightens me to know how much so......awesome poem Ilene ....really smiled at this one..thanks
Manassian Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 10:58 AM
AMAZING, Ilene! Simply amazing...and OH SO TRUE! :) I'm impressed as ever! HUGS
Dietrich Avatar
July 30, 2013 at 12:12 AM
So many things hidden in our bodies and all those tiny cells. You wrote of it so well!!!
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