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Blood

you break, you take, you ruin it all you run, you scream, i take the fall you go, you kill, our lives at stake you dump another body into the lake you mate, feed, kill, repeat no bother trying to be discreet the warm of blood, the taste of meat makes another tasty treat you have zero fear of damnation you disrespect all creation you are the evil i avoid and in the end will be destroyed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/22/2010 12:49:00 PM
Me and my Wife Chay Love Love Love your poem!! :D -Echo
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Date: 2/22/2010 7:49:00 AM
wow! this is great but ,call me a dummy if you want but im having some time trying to figure what it is you are writting about, was a great write flowed wonderfully, it says our lives at stake so im guessing maybe a lover that is not so loved by you anymore, that second stanza slightly reminisent of zombies! which i love!=)Jo
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Date: 2/21/2010 1:23:00 AM
powerful words
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