Blood

you break, you take, you ruin it all
you run, you scream, i take the fall
you go, you kill, our lives at stake
you dump another body into the lake

you mate, feed, kill, repeat
no bother trying to be discreet
the warm of blood, the taste of meat
makes another tasty treat

you have zero fear of damnation
you disrespect all creation
you are the evil i avoid
and in the end will be destroyed
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Echo Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 12:49 PM
Me and my Wife Chay Love Love Love your poem!! :D -Echo
Smith Avatar
February 22, 2010 at 7:49 AM
wow! this is great but ,call me a dummy if you want but im having some time trying to figure what it is you are writting about, was a great write flowed wonderfully, it says our lives at stake so im guessing maybe a lover that is not so loved by you anymore, that second stanza slightly reminisent of zombies! which i love!=)Jo
Palli Avatar
February 21, 2010 at 1:23 AM
powerful words
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