Blocked Drains

My poor heart aches as my mind cogitates
upon the deep desires of my dark soul,
and searching for profound truths that can be
expressed in mystic subtle syllables.
Alas such thoughts come at the worst of times.
I dream of them, elusive to extreme.
I wake and these abstractions spiral up
into nothingness of infinity,
ethereal concepts lost into space,
misty spectral reveries, brown studies
of doubtful natures, devious musings
of negligible earthly happenings.
All lost, unattainable conceptions,
leaving me spiritless limp and listless,
a ramekin of moronic despair,
riding a foamy crest of frustration.
Until my looking glass is tinted rose,
the black clouds break and faith is reassured.
Then I shall take up my pen and paper
and scribble all my endless worthless thoughts.
Alas that holy day is still to be.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Rodrigues Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 7:17 PM
… Until my looking glass is tinted rose, the black clouds break and faith is reassured. Shall I give you my sad song… I think I shall pray. <3
Kiser Avatar
November 3, 2021 at 3:30 PM
Very well crafted with emotion, a vibrant piece. You expressed the feelings quite well here.
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 12:59 PM
this reminds me of myself waking from an awesome dream and not able to remember one iota of it!! Great writing, Victor
Ball Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 6:04 AM
WoW! So much emotion here. I think we all suffer a bit of self loathing and that's because we see ourselves with all our faults and hope no one ever finds out the TRUE ME. But God does know the true me and loves us anyhow. There is nothing hidden from Him. Yet His love knows no bounds. As All Good Fathers ARE. Great write here my friend. Loved it. God Bless, JB
Kendrick Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 4:33 AM
"Until my looking glass is tinted rose, the black clouds break and faith is reassured." Some days or weeks seem like they need these lines to come into our lives. It is good that you can see a good end or a light at the end of the tunnel. I enjoyed reading this one. Your visit was uplifting. Sara
Daniel Avatar
November 1, 2021 at 1:54 AM
A poem of despair that ends with hope, something which keeps us going on, Victor:) and your thoughts are never worthless:)
Skelly Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 10:01 PM
Always better to look at the world through rose-tinted glass, particularly these days -everything is so gloomy it's easy to dispair...Delice
Seeker Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 7:09 PM
and thus the yo-yo moves, up and down, the light and dark … enjoy the silence in the vibrant void too Victor! Who knows what surprises await?
May Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 9:50 AM
A gloomy write with despair giving way to hope at end, Well penned Victor..
Buehler Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 9:49 AM
Your descriptions of an absent muse are so powerful and evocative Victor. Brilliant writing. :)
Pandit Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 7:10 AM
WOW! Brilliant vocabulary, Victor. A superb journey through your thoughts--an illustration of how to write a great poem. A FAVE for me.
Allison Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 4:25 AM
deep and dark Vicotr i particularly like 'a ramekin of moronic despair'.. but remember tomorrow is another day and hopefully brighter:-) hugs Jan xx
Edmonds  Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 3:48 AM
It happens to us all Victor, we wonder if we’ll ever write anything again, then alike a jumping Jack the muse is back and we’re writing something, it’s extremely exciting. Excellent write… Belle
Rose  Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 3:32 AM
Your words may be endless by never worthless dear friend. Each piece of scribble and phrase holds truth, fantasy, love, hopes and dreams. How can that every be worthless. Have a lovely day, don't let the ghoulies in, lol, Happy Halloween V
Cunningham Avatar
October 31, 2021 at 3:12 AM
We all have those days when gloom engulfs us Victor, but brighter days are ahead, but we have to be patient. Tom
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