David Kavanagh Poet Than-Bauk

Blizzard Reconsidered Tb

One Snowflake falls
                   Then follows all
      Drifts blow and grow
                          Wallowing kids
                      Tomorrow skids
               Next day a tow
                           Borrow warm hat
                      Sore elbows drat
                   Ice skating woes


Bauk Than - Than Bauk Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: charles messina 
06/12/20 extended version with rhyme

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Kim Rodrigues February 17, 2021 at 5:10 AM You follow the flakes from start to pain! Congratulations! David Kavanagh February 17, 2021 at 5:29 AM Heya Kim, thank you so much, I’m delighted to get on the list, it’s a fantastic form of poetry, got great enjoyment writing this one, cheers David

Charles Messina February 15, 2021 at 9:29 PM Well done, David. Congrats on your win! David Kavanagh February 15, 2021 at 11:38 PM Thank you so much Charles, I’m delighted to have made the cut in your contest, I enjoyed this form of poetry, cheers David

Kim Rodrigues December 10, 2020 at 5:54 PM Fun when we draw out the verse! David Kavanagh December 10, 2020 at 8:05 PM Hit a few blind alleys, along the way Kim, still your right was fun, cheers David

John Watt December 9, 2020 at 3:31 PM David, I liked all the 'ow' rhymes you came up with, and how you lined them up in a column. You also told a nice wintry story with this challenging form. Well done, best wishes ~ John David Kavanagh December 9, 2020 at 10:53 PM Thank you John, I thought lining them up, make the syllable rhyme and position easier to measure, I just about made the final line was feeling the heat in the cold, cheers David