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Blizzard

High winds churl, howling
calling forth their minions
open wide the gates
the battle will be long, fierce!
through the mountains, hills and vales
~*~
02/08/13

Copyright © Audrey Haick | Year Posted 2013

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April 13, 2013 at 1:15 PM

just love this, my friend - I felt chilly reading it, lol

March 14, 2013 at 6:44 AM

I love this, Annalise!...battles, high winds, minions, mountains...Wow! All this in one tanka! You have a lovely name, by the way.

March 14, 2013 at 8:45 PM

Thank you, Caleb. I enjoyed writing this as we held our breath during this storm! LOL

February 25, 2013 at 12:59 PM

Very intense! Perfect description of the sometimes wicked weather. Hopefully you do get inspired for that contest. :)

February 9, 2013 at 12:13 PM

An amazing Tanka - very well worded. Thanks for stopping by my Tanka Hug Me, Annalise. I am so pleased you like it. Love -Mohammad

Andrea Dietrich

February 9, 2013 at 11:43 AM

GREAT way to do tanka. I did a windy one too recently (a sonnet I think)

Connie Gildersleeve

February 9, 2013 at 9:02 AM

Shivering painting written my your pen. Conveyed well with your tanka. Warm Smiles, Connie

February 9, 2013 at 6:35 AM

wonderful tanka Annalise

Anne-Lise Andresen

February 9, 2013 at 6:13 AM

Lovely written Annalise! - Have a beautiful weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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