Blizzard

We are waiting The sky does not breathe Slowly we fall to bitter cold Still nothing moves We are waiting It is so cold My nape goes hot And knows the snow In the air In stillness It anticipates

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/2/2010 6:46:00 PM

what a cool feeling deep, enjoyed,..p.d.

John Loving Iii

Date: 3/30/2009 1:22:00 PM

for the one last time i hope. john lovingiii

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/28/2009 12:54:00 PM

Nothing misty in this vivid description of the approaching blizzard. Well done!

Lena Townsend

Date: 3/28/2009 10:14:00 AM

Wonderful writing. I love the line "The sky does not breathe" words of a true poet. Here in Kansas we were told the snow was coming and yet we still wait, so far we are only seeing the bitter cold temps and ICE. Smiles from Lolita