Blissful Unawareness

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Reality lies sandwiched between fantasy and faith. But the existence of hope allows for uncertainty. Authority looms in black, with its rigid arms outstretched. And swallowing human rights, it defecates slavery. Lonely hearts desperately haunt the edge of dying dreams. And promises rain manna, on gullible, hungry souls. Freedom fuels decisions found only outside the box. Conformity is rooted in blissful unawareness. Puppets get tangled in strings dangling from fragments of trust. And stumble blindly through life, in pursuit of phantom dreams.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 5/26/2018 7:58:00 PM
Strong message, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/27/2018 7:49:00 AM
Thanks Line, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/1/2015 6:31:00 PM
A lot of truth here Emil and great use of vocabulary - once asked where my son was going to get his religion from I replied from Sci-Fi & Fantasy where it belongs. Many writers of these genre explore the topic endlessly - like Piers Anthony & Orson Scott Card- Light & Love
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/2/2015 8:22:00 AM
Thanks so much Debbie, I appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 2/26/2015 4:51:00 PM
Well written poem, to be free is such a wonderful feeling. A 7 blessings dear friend
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/26/2015 5:17:00 PM
Thanks so much Eve, I love to hear from you. Emile.
Date: 2/26/2015 4:39:00 PM
Quite a fascinating piece here, Emile. You express things very originally. I particularly love the third stanza. Awesome work! The last stanza as well sticks with me... pursuing phantom dreams... oooh, its really eerie and carries a lot of truth. Always, Laura
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/26/2015 5:18:00 PM
Thanks Laura, I welcome you support. Emile.
Date: 2/26/2015 4:03:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your work. Phantom dreams are a difficult pursuit but I believe that you have some more attainable..Thanks for stopping by. Sara
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/26/2015 5:16:00 PM
Thanks Sara, I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 2/26/2015 12:40:00 PM
A great essay on the human condition, especially with all the ugliness that's going on around the world! Well written Emile! Jack
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Emile Pinet
Date: 2/26/2015 2:02:00 PM
Thanks Jack, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 2/26/2015 12:23:00 PM
very powerful and deep write Emile it is what is between your lines that also shouts to be heard excellent pen 7
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Date: 2/26/2015 12:30:00 PM
Thank you very much Shadow, your comments are always welcomed. Emile.
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