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Bliss Unblocked

Heartbroken, weak and unable to resist, These thoughts of you that persist, My head hurts trying to desist, My hand reaches for a quill as eager fingers insist, To write these words that my voice is saying, they go like this, In truth, your absence has brought great relief, and your presence, has been missed, And in my memory, thoughts of you will always exist, But as I make new memories, both old and new will learn to coexist, Dark shadows wouldn’t last forever, and in my own company, I look forward to experiencing feelings of long-awaited bliss. So long as there’s space on the canvas of life, the rivers of dreams will continue to flow, And with every breath I take from the Valley of Hope, my smile will again shine and glow. By Zyrool

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Date: 2/20/2025 4:19:00 AM
Dear zyrool, this is such a poignant and heartfelt poem that flows with such sincere emotions and youv expressed it effortlessly, i really love the lines “Dark shadows wouldn’t last forever, and in my own company, I look forward to experiencing feelings of long-awaited bliss.” I feel inner strength and light within you amidst the darkness and more, a powerful poem! Pleasure reading you today. Sending you light today and always
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Date: 2/20/2025 4:43:00 AM
Thank you for your beautiful comment and words. Greatly appreciated. Sending Blessings your way.X
Date: 2/19/2025 7:09:00 PM
Mixed emotions and yet as so eloquently expressed, we must release that attachment which no longer serves us
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Date: 2/20/2025 12:44:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words and support, US. Means a lot. Have a wonderful day and a great rest of the week.
Date: 2/8/2025 5:13:00 PM
Shows a lot of strength - enjoyed reading <3
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 2/8/2025 11:32:00 PM
Hello Paige, thank you for the visit, means a lot. Have a beautifully blessed Sunday, my friend.
Date: 2/5/2025 4:56:00 PM
Creative and descriptive writing in this one. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
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Date: 2/5/2025 11:56:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Sara. Much appreciated. Have a great day, my friend. Stay Blessed.
Date: 2/4/2025 5:04:00 AM
I love the way you showed the contrast of life. Your last stanza is so positive. Great poetry.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 2/4/2025 7:26:00 AM
Hello Victor, thank you so much for your beautiful comment, nice to hear the words’great poetry’ you made my week so special, Thanks my friend. Sending Blessings your way.
Date: 2/3/2025 7:30:00 PM
I enjoyed the very cavalier style of your poem. I believe everyone feels this way occasionally. A very good read.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 2/3/2025 10:50:00 PM
Hello Hilda, thank you so much your words mean a lot. Wishing you a wonderful new week ahead, my dear friend. Sending Blessings your way.
Date: 2/3/2025 3:35:00 PM
Arriva derci. Ciao. Adieu. Bye bye. So long. Don't let the door hit ya on the way out baby! Nice one Zy
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 2/3/2025 10:46:00 PM
Hello Tom, loved your comment, you sure cheered me up. Thanks my friend. Wishing you a fabulous new week ahead. Stay Blessed.
Date: 2/3/2025 12:45:00 PM
Well said, Zyrool, in lyrical lines. I love the lines "thoughts of you will always exist/but as I make new memories/both old and new will learn to co-exist!" Absolutely profound perceptiveness. Thank you for sharing your heart. Blessings to you!
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 2/3/2025 2:14:00 PM
Hello Sam, thank you so much for your beautiful words, greatly appreciated. Those lines I wanted to show that it’s not possible to forget or change a past love, why not let it be… Sending Blessings your way my friend.
Date: 2/3/2025 9:40:00 AM
Falling in and out of love is like taking a roller coaster ride. So are reliving the memories they instill in our hearts. You've labeled it free verse, but you'd done a very good job of rhyming, Zyrool.
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 2/3/2025 10:21:00 AM
Hello Lin, thank you for dropping by and your beautiful words and compliment. I was going to put rhyme but being used to FV I slipped up. Will amend it now. Sending Blessings your way my friend. Have a great new week ahead.
Date: 2/3/2025 9:24:00 AM
Hi Zyrool….l love this poem….the contrast of old thoughts and memories and the new …’old and new will learn to coexist’ says it all….well written! Debx
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Zyrool Gifford
Date: 2/3/2025 10:17:00 AM
Hello Deb, thank you so much for your lovely words, I thought coexist is how we should see it, as no one can ever forget anything to do with love. Wishing you a wonderful new week ahead my friend.
Date: 2/3/2025 6:31:00 AM
there are women we can't forget, they become like ghost and accompany our life, as if they were present, thanks for the touching poem send you some light
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Date: 2/3/2025 10:12:00 AM
Hello Yann, Thank you for the read, means a lot. Have a great day my friend. Stay Blessed.

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