Bliss State

The silken softness of your plum red lips brush my parted mouth.
Your body eclipses all thoughts not carnal as your tongue moves.
The heavens shines all the brighter for the bliss of your kiss.

Across my teeth your tongue plays stopping to dart against mine.
The give and take of breathe and heat a course past love's incline entrapped.
Oh, the engorged plumpness of those moist and parted lips divine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

A   Avatar
February 12, 2012 at 11:01 AM
Good after noon Debbie, in what blissful state are we this morning... well stated ,,, i got to say.. the passion in your sijo.. seems mouth watering... enjoyed,..p.d.
Brown Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 7:52 AM
Congratulations to you on your win in Tracie 's "Sijo Kisses" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 9:40 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win! Blessings, Rhonda
Arno Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 11:41 AM
Ohhhhhhh this is gooooooood. Great job Debbie...Cant get the smile off my face. Super write...:) Jon
Arno Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 11:44 AM
Can I get in line? Im all puckered up :)
Arowolo Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 10:23 AM
This is wonderful and awesome,Deb.You deserved that No.1 place lady...Very romantic...I love the 3rd line of verse one..."The heavens shines all the brighter for the bliss of your kiss"....thanks for this delivery......
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 9:27 AM
Congratulations Debbie well deserved win x
Williams Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 8:59 AM
Debbie congrats on your win..David
Sweetheart Avatar
February 5, 2012 at 8:16 AM
congrats Debbie on a dynamic first place win for this spectacular sijo entry luv..
K. Avatar
February 2, 2012 at 12:43 PM
Ooh lala! What bliss indeed! How cool to write this from a man's perspective! and yesss! I finally wrote a sonnet! I hope it's passable, but yup, need some tweaking! and eep ok still have to revise my last two lines... :D hugs to you!
Lefanue Avatar
February 1, 2012 at 5:28 AM
Dear Debbie, yes it is so sad what man's greed is doing to God's creation. Nice poem - cungers up a myriad of thoughts. Just found out that all our comments are free for everyone to see on Google - not thrilled about that. Love & God bless, Maureen x
Long Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 8:43 PM
Well-written, I enjoyed reading it.
Poet Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 7:50 PM
:)
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace