Bliss State

The silken softness of your plum red lips brush my parted mouth.
Your body eclipses all thoughts not carnal as your tongue moves.
The heavens shines all the brighter for the bliss of your kiss.

Across my teeth your tongue plays stopping to dart against mine.
The give and take of breathe and heat a course past love's incline entrapped.
Oh, the engorged plumpness of those moist and parted lips divine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 2/12/2012 11:01:00 AM
Good after noon Debbie, in what blissful state are we this morning... well stated ,,, i got to say.. the passion in your sijo.. seems mouth watering... enjoyed,..p.d.
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Date: 2/7/2012 7:52:00 AM
Congratulations to you on your win in Tracie 's "Sijo Kisses" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/5/2012 9:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win! Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 2/5/2012 11:41:00 AM
Ohhhhhhh this is gooooooood. Great job Debbie...Cant get the smile off my face. Super write...:) Jon
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Date: 2/5/2012 11:44:00 AM
Can I get in line? Im all puckered up :)
Date: 2/5/2012 10:23:00 AM
This is wonderful and awesome,Deb.You deserved that No.1 place lady...Very romantic...I love the 3rd line of verse one..."The heavens shines all the brighter for the bliss of your kiss"....thanks for this delivery......
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Date: 2/5/2012 9:27:00 AM
Congratulations Debbie well deserved win x
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Date: 2/5/2012 8:59:00 AM
Debbie congrats on your win..David
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Date: 2/5/2012 8:16:00 AM
congrats Debbie on a dynamic first place win for this spectacular sijo entry luv..
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Date: 2/2/2012 12:43:00 PM
Ooh lala! What bliss indeed! How cool to write this from a man's perspective! and yesss! I finally wrote a sonnet! I hope it's passable, but yup, need some tweaking! and eep ok still have to revise my last two lines... :D hugs to you!
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Date: 2/1/2012 5:28:00 AM
Dear Debbie, yes it is so sad what man's greed is doing to God's creation. Nice poem - cungers up a myriad of thoughts. Just found out that all our comments are free for everyone to see on Google - not thrilled about that. Love & God bless, Maureen x
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Date: 1/31/2012 8:43:00 PM
Well-written, I enjoyed reading it.
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Date: 1/31/2012 7:50:00 PM
:)
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