Beata Agustin Poet Tail-rhyme

Bliss, Hope, Faith

Everlasting life* so precious
The Lord grants midst love that’s gracious---
                                                            ---My bliss …  radiant!

Vanquishing death sting and sins’ reign
Christ offered me redemption gain---
                                                 ---My hope … jubilant!

Assuring me blessed future
God prepares eternal venture---
                                          ---My faith …  triumphant!

*John 3:16 For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life.

June 10, 2020
1st place, "Triple Stanza Couplet Tail-Rhyme" Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Charles Messina; judged on 7/2/2020.

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Aditi Mishra July 5, 2020 at 3:37 PM Back to congratulate you on your win Beata. Blessings and love :)

John Watt July 2, 2020 at 12:05 PM Your faith and God's love both shine brightly in this tail-rhyme, Beata. Nice flow and use of the form. SO blessed to read this today. Congratulations on your #1! Grace and peace, John

Paula Goldsmith July 2, 2020 at 10:47 AM Congratulations on your win. "Beautiful" Enjoy your win and day.........

William Kelii Kekaula July 2, 2020 at 10:36 AM Much enjoyed your rendering, Beata, my compliments truly for achieving 1st Place, blessings -- Aloha~@William

Frances Schiavina July 2, 2020 at 10:27 AM Uplifting! congratulations on your first place and thank you for sharing you joy filled faith

Eve Roper July 2, 2020 at 9:24 AM Beautiful, Beata, congratulations on your win.

Regina Mcintosh July 2, 2020 at 6:02 AM Beautifully done! I love it. God bless you

Charles Messina July 2, 2020 at 5:31 AM Beata, for some reason I can comment now (lol) back with congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings

Aditi Mishra June 10, 2020 at 2:35 PM This is blissful Beata. Hope to read more from your pen. Blessings and love :)

Mahtab Bangalee June 10, 2020 at 5:48 AM excellent Tail-rhyme poem on Bliss, Hope, Faith- enjoyable sharing