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Bliss, Hope, Faith

Everlasting life* so precious The Lord grants midst love that’s gracious--- ---My bliss … radiant! Vanquishing death sting and sins’ reign Christ offered me redemption gain--- ---My hope … jubilant! Assuring me blessed future God prepares eternal venture--- ---My faith … triumphant! *John 3:16 For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life. June 10, 2020 1st place, "Triple Stanza Couplet Tail-Rhyme" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Charles Messina; judged on 7/2/2020.

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Date: 7/5/2020 3:37:00 PM
Back to congratulate you on your win Beata. Blessings and love :)
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Date: 7/2/2020 12:05:00 PM
Your faith and God's love both shine brightly in this tail-rhyme, Beata. Nice flow and use of the form. SO blessed to read this today. Congratulations on your #1! Grace and peace, John
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Date: 7/2/2020 10:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "Beautiful" Enjoy your win and day.........
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Date: 7/2/2020 10:36:00 AM
Much enjoyed your rendering, Beata, my compliments truly for achieving 1st Place, blessings -- Aloha~@William
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Date: 7/2/2020 10:27:00 AM
Uplifting! congratulations on your first place and thank you for sharing you joy filled faith
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Date: 7/2/2020 9:24:00 AM
Beautiful, Beata, congratulations on your win.
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Date: 7/2/2020 6:02:00 AM
Beautifully done! I love it. God bless you
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Date: 7/2/2020 5:31:00 AM
Beata, for some reason I can comment now (lol) back with congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings
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Date: 6/10/2020 2:35:00 PM
This is blissful Beata. Hope to read more from your pen. Blessings and love :)
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Date: 6/10/2020 5:48:00 AM
excellent Tail-rhyme poem on Bliss, Hope, Faith- enjoyable sharing
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