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Bliss Beats Beckon

To walk the talk over burning hot coal Tests the mettle of God-bestowed free will Debate ensues between ego and soul By hammer and tongs, shaped on the anvil Hesitation signals we’re not ready Looking at how to better our morrow Unable yet to hold love’s flame steady Self-serving instinct cause of our sorrow In the playground of life, as we do dance We begin to look beyond outer form Every breath we take, offers us a chance To choose love over strife, in each life storm It’s high time hermit, that we stand erect Heeding voice of conscience, our life’s perfect 21-April-2022
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Rodrigues Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 5:41 AM
Enjoyed your sonnet! First two lines and next to last line, especially.
Seeker Avatar
April 21, 2022 at 9:08 AM
Thank you, Kim!
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