Bliss

Bliss
is a place
where the ground is made of clouds
sounds around are crafted from serenity
anxiety is unknown
and impossibility is phantasmic
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Gist Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 2:35 PM
Sounds like Heaven...
Andresen Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 4:45 AM
- A great 3rd place in the contest, congratulations, Vermillion :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gentry Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 10:37 PM
Congratulations on your win with this oh-so-true poem. I enjoyed it.
Gauthier Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 5:37 PM
Thanks, Vermillion, for entering my contest with this sweet little poem. Congrats on your bronze medal win.
Vaso Avatar
November 29, 2017 at 12:41 AM
Beautiful, knowing what is anxiety, I can relate to this!
Akun Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 9:32 PM
I do agree...what matters most is the non-existence of anxiety.
Buck Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 4:10 PM
I'll take a scoop of that myself. Great write. Keep them coming. And thank you for sharing with all of us on the soup. oldbuck
Kavanaugh Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 3:25 PM
I am there in the place when I read your verses. Thank you
Ellison Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 3:12 PM
Now that is my kind of poem!!! Happy Jack...welcome!
Sands Avatar
November 15, 2017 at 4:26 AM
Very nice. Welcome to poetry soup :)
Kinch  Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 4:36 PM
A blissful place indeed.
One Avatar
November 9, 2017 at 3:56 PM
Indeed it is.. a place we all want to be.. Great first post.. Welcome to poetry soup..
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