Bliss

...to Julie, my forever love


You breathe as I breathe,
   your heart beats as mine;
our souls are as one
   for our lips taste that wine
that comes from our knowing
   we'll always have this,
two hearts and one love
   consecrated in bliss.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006

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February 12, 2009 at 7:46 PM
This is such a lovely poem, Keith. It is written so tenderly with such sweet emotion. Just beautiful. I hope you are well. I remember reading somewhere that winter isn't your best season. Just read my first comment for Crystal River. It was from you. I still love the enthusiasm of your words! Thank you for all the encouragement you have given me, Keith. I've come some distance since then! Love and hugs, Robin
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