Bliss

I don't need to know which way is up or down, why the hell do you think we have elevators?

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Beata Agustin

Date: 10/18/2024 11:54:00 PM

I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/18/2016 1:19:00 PM

David, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 12/6/2015 1:28:00 PM

DAVID, Enjoyed reading your poem today. LUV **SKAT**

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/28/2010 12:14:00 PM

ok different poem, welcome to poetry soup. i don't think we have met. Keep sharing your works with us.