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Bliss

my dream takes me to a lush forest of paths a cool dim place of gnarled trees twisting there is a solemn grandness in the hues of green that sooths me in bliss so sublime wrapping me silent where drooping branches caress my soul to tranquil serenity and I awake with peace in my heart to sun ___________________ March 28, 2021 Poetry/Verse/bliss Copyright Protected, ID 03-13442-413-28 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the contest, All Yours (Mar 29) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 03/29/21

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Date: 3/30/2021 6:26:00 AM
I love the peacefulness your fabulous poem invokes, Con:-) Too bad it got an N/A. Enjoyed it!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/30/2021 12:36:00 PM
Edward, thank you for the compliment, well, regarding the NA, it happens ! _Constance
Date: 3/28/2021 6:52:00 PM
soothing and enlivening!
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Constance La France
Date: 3/29/2021 6:01:00 AM
Seeker, thank you so much for the nice comment, grateful _Constance
Date: 3/28/2021 4:33:00 PM
Delicate and pretty, it reads like a lullaby.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/28/2021 4:35:00 PM
Caren, thank you so much for visiting and the compliment, appreciate _Constance

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