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Joseph May's Pyramid Contest...17 Aug 25

Blink


BLINK Green Light -- Farewells strung Dawn whisks in a flash Lost among zooms of speed Exiting from my blank life “ Memories throb in empty beats.”
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Callus Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 5:22 AM
I came back to congratulate you on your fine win, Nette..well done!! (unfortunately my original comment is nowhere to be seen :( ~ Warm regards, my friend // paul
Dietrich Avatar
August 22, 2025 at 9:00 AM
Marvelous imagery, Bette. Loved seeing this one on the winner list
Goldsmith Avatar
August 21, 2025 at 11:31 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Blink" write again. Today, it is getting harder to drive with all the nuts on the road. Be Safe... I Have a blessed day with your win................
May Avatar
August 20, 2025 at 5:06 PM
Congrats on your win Nette, Very nicely penned
Hind Avatar
August 19, 2025 at 6:01 PM
Very different and beautiful all the same - good luck :)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 5:17 PM
an amazing 'pyramid.' I especially liked 'lost among zooms of speed.' Best wishes with the contest, Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
August 17, 2025 at 12:53 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "Blink" write. "Good Luck" We both did this contest. Have a blessed day writing away..............
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