Blindness-Tb Edited

So blind is he,
fails to see her
turn bee…flirting.

November 29, 2020
Syllable count : 4 per line (howmanysyllables.com)
Contest : Than-Bauk Me
Sponsor : Charles Messina
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Allison Avatar
December 7, 2020 at 2:49 PM
cute one Subimal, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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December 5, 2020 at 3:45 AM
Congrats on your placement in the contest. Sara
Roper Avatar
December 4, 2020 at 8:45 PM
Congratulations on your winning placement. Hugs Eve
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December 4, 2020 at 2:53 PM
Hi Subimal, Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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December 4, 2020 at 1:34 PM
Nice entry, Subimal. Well done my friend. Congratulations on your win! Stay well and safe... Charlie
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