Blindfold

I feel the sea washing over my pebbles
My sand, the flesh, faltering into
A great wash of darkness pouring over me
Like the spill of a vast ink well
It is two skies clashing like
Folds; a curtain. Shaded
And saved by a generous
Hand, blinding my eyes like
A mask. An all-giving blindfold
Passing for only a moment
Delicate as fresh snow
It reveals a secret. A new
World, refreshed and vibrant
Buzzing like bees in this great
Sea-swamped hive. It is a
Very simple pleasure.

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The insomniac finally got some sleep! Not a full night, but sleep is sleep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Devonshire Avatar
May 9, 2009 at 10:55 PM
Great reflection on the way other senses are enhanced when our eyes are closed. And I'm glad you got some sleep! What's your secret, Nathaniel? I think I've tried everything. (Too many thoughts racing through the old mind.) Very nice poem! Love, Carolyn
Shango Avatar
May 3, 2009 at 7:00 PM
I love the parallelism ... it deepens the poem, mastefully done too, one love, my friend
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