Blinded By the Light

Blinded By The Light


                          Claim of the mind mystically enlightened

                          Fail to forecast the final trajectory of destiny

                          Hovering over that blinding envisioned journey

                          Crafted by those who proclaim to be the illumined







Penned:2022
Aboard cruise liner:
Rhapsody of the Seas
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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November 16, 2022 at 4:34 PM
Even if many people plan their path and assert that they are enlightened, no one can accurately predict the final path that fate will take because it is not in their control. Well written, Anselmo.
Boles Avatar
November 17, 2022 at 12:55 PM
I really appreciate you for stopping by and sharing your perspective which I always value Lasaad! Thank you. I believe the future rules itself...ab
George Avatar
November 15, 2022 at 7:02 PM
No one can forecast the final trajectory of destiny though some chart its course who claim to be the illumined. We do not know anything until it comes on us ! As ever, powerful and concise....Anselmo
Boles Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 5:58 AM
Thank you Valsa, you're right on the mark! I think humans have a tendency to side with preconceived notions even without solid facts. Always love your comments...ab
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