Blinded

I finally got my head out of my ass

for too long I moved in the wrong direction

unable to see

for you have to understand

it was dark down there.
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Sambourne Avatar
November 16, 2022 at 1:15 PM
Terrific - love the suggestion of bummed out places + darkness. You've helped me to see the light - remove one's head from isolation + self absorption. Cheers Brian
Lamoureux Avatar
January 19, 2020 at 9:13 AM
That would be a tremendous demonstration of flexibility *lol*
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