Blind To Me

1. All I want is an increase in bonding
and on that smile to be a shareholder
watching the growth of your guts silently
to tenderly tame a curious filly
and put our hearts to a lovely feast

Chorus
I’m trying to make you see
I’m trying to make you know
I’m wishing to make you feel
that your heart is all I need

2. Let me shield your errors with a bumper
allow me mend those cracks love, with my splint
I’ll make those pains exist in brevity
making sure your shame and worry don’t bloat
to raise happy moments, never to slump

Chorus
I’m trying to make you see
I’m trying to make you know
I’m wishing to make you feel
that your heart is all I need

3. In the land of beauty, you are sovereign
perceived so perfect as I stay snowblind
your resistance seemingly factitious
clearly flaunting your charm on a showboat
but to another, you showed the sky light

Chorus X2
I’m trying to make you see
I’m trying to make you know
I’m wishing to make you feel
that your heart is all I need
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Onaf Avatar
July 20, 2017 at 7:28 AM
Sweet
Talwar Avatar
July 3, 2017 at 6:13 PM
An awesome lyric I've yet to come across this quality . Kindly check for my recent work I'll be writing on eye donation let me know if it motivates
White Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 9:54 AM
I miss you, Funom, I hope you will return :)
Makama Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 9:27 AM
I miss you too so much Darren White... I will visit your pages soon...
Thirtyseven Avatar
May 6, 2017 at 9:28 AM
You write from your heart once again, and your heart is so generous. Nice.
Makama Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 9:26 AM
Thank you so much Scott thirtyseven... You should have entered thirtyeight by now.... Lol!
Mckenzie Avatar
May 1, 2017 at 4:51 PM
oh and here again a master of words I shall never forget ! you charm and tantalize the mind's eye!
Makama Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 9:25 AM
Wow! Thank you so much Laura for your sweet words
Horn Avatar
April 8, 2017 at 5:58 AM
Sure miss your poems and comments. Hope all is okay with you.
Makama Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 9:22 AM
Thank you very much James Horn
White Avatar
March 31, 2017 at 9:12 AM
This is incredibly good, I also want to tell you that I miss seeing you post. I notice.
Makama Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 9:21 AM
I miss your writes too, I will definitely come by soon. Thank you very much Darren White
Lamoureux Avatar
March 31, 2017 at 7:22 AM
A tremendous write!
Makama Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 9:20 AM
Thank you Sir Richard, its been a while sir
Andresen Avatar
March 10, 2017 at 4:41 AM
- A lovely song, Funom - Well done lyric, a 7 - hugs and happy weekend - // Anne-Lise :)
Makama Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 9:20 AM
Thank you very much Sunshine Smile
Roper Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 8:04 PM
Wonderful love song a7 hugs
Makama Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 9:19 AM
Thank you so much Eve Roper
Ball Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 4:51 PM
WoW! You bare your soul only to have her heart given to another. Great song my friend. God Bless and a big 7 from me. JB
Makama Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 9:18 AM
Thank you so much Judy Ball
Green Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 11:13 AM
What a beautiful and heart touching love song. Very nicely done my friend.
Makama Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 9:14 AM
Thank you so much Chris Green
Trifiatis Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 8:57 AM
Impressively profound dear, Funom!
Makama Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 9:10 AM
Thank you so much Demetrios
Daniel Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 8:55 AM
Lovely lyric, Funom, that shows you care to your loved one:) by the way, I'm a woman:) just call me Jo:)
Makama Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 9:08 AM
Thank you so much Jo Daniel
Smith Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 8:52 AM
Good write Funom...
Makama Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 9:05 AM
Thank you so much Charlie Smith
Gupta Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 7:24 AM
Nice lyric ... Much enjoyed ...
Makama Avatar
May 16, 2017 at 9:05 AM
Thank you so much Probir
Rodrigues Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 6:42 AM
Such beautiful lines! In your chorus did you mean to say "feel"?
Makama Avatar
March 8, 2017 at 7:13 AM
Yes, thank you very much for the observation, I am correcting it immediately. Thank you very much.
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