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Blind To Me

1. All I want is an increase in bonding and on that smile to be a shareholder watching the growth of your guts silently to tenderly tame a curious filly and put our hearts to a lovely feast Chorus I’m trying to make you see I’m trying to make you know I’m wishing to make you feel that your heart is all I need 2. Let me shield your errors with a bumper allow me mend those cracks love, with my splint I’ll make those pains exist in brevity making sure your shame and worry don’t bloat to raise happy moments, never to slump Chorus I’m trying to make you see I’m trying to make you know I’m wishing to make you feel that your heart is all I need 3. In the land of beauty, you are sovereign perceived so perfect as I stay snowblind your resistance seemingly factitious clearly flaunting your charm on a showboat but to another, you showed the sky light Chorus X2 I’m trying to make you see I’m trying to make you know I’m wishing to make you feel that your heart is all I need

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Olumuyiwa Onaf

Date: 7/20/2017 7:28:00 AM

Sweet

Bawa Talwar

Date: 7/3/2017 6:13:00 PM

An awesome lyric I've yet to come across this quality . Kindly check for my recent work I'll be writing on eye donation let me know if it motivates

Darren White

Date: 5/6/2017 9:54:00 AM

I miss you, Funom, I hope you will return :)

Funom Makama
Date: 5/16/2017 9:27:00 AM

I miss you too so much Darren White... I will visit your pages soon...

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 5/6/2017 9:28:00 AM

You write from your heart once again, and your heart is so generous. Nice.

Funom Makama
Date: 5/16/2017 9:26:00 AM

Thank you so much Scott thirtyseven... You should have entered thirtyeight by now.... Lol!

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 5/1/2017 4:51:00 PM

oh and here again a master of words I shall never forget ! you charm and tantalize the mind's eye!

Funom Makama
Date: 5/16/2017 9:25:00 AM

Wow! Thank you so much Laura for your sweet words

James Horn

Date: 4/8/2017 5:58:00 AM

Sure miss your poems and comments. Hope all is okay with you.

Funom Makama
Date: 5/16/2017 9:22:00 AM

Thank you very much James Horn

Darren White

Date: 3/31/2017 9:12:00 AM

This is incredibly good, I also want to tell you that I miss seeing you post. I notice.

Funom Makama
Date: 5/16/2017 9:21:00 AM

I miss your writes too, I will definitely come by soon. Thank you very much Darren White

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/31/2017 7:22:00 AM

A tremendous write!

Funom Makama
Date: 5/16/2017 9:20:00 AM

Thank you Sir Richard, its been a while sir

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/10/2017 4:41:00 AM

- A lovely song, Funom - Well done lyric, a 7 - hugs and happy weekend - // Anne-Lise :)

Funom Makama
Date: 5/16/2017 9:20:00 AM

Thank you very much Sunshine Smile

Eve Roper

Date: 3/8/2017 8:04:00 PM

Wonderful love song a7 hugs

Funom Makama
Date: 5/16/2017 9:19:00 AM

Thank you so much Eve Roper

Judy Ball

Date: 3/8/2017 4:51:00 PM

WoW! You bare your soul only to have her heart given to another. Great song my friend. God Bless and a big 7 from me. JB

Funom Makama
Date: 5/16/2017 9:18:00 AM

Thank you so much Judy Ball

Chris Green

Date: 3/8/2017 11:13:00 AM

What a beautiful and heart touching love song. Very nicely done my friend.

Funom Makama
Date: 5/16/2017 9:14:00 AM

Thank you so much Chris Green

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/8/2017 8:57:00 AM

Impressively profound dear, Funom!

Funom Makama
Date: 5/16/2017 9:10:00 AM

Thank you so much Demetrios

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/8/2017 8:55:00 AM

Lovely lyric, Funom, that shows you care to your loved one:) by the way, I'm a woman:) just call me Jo:)

Funom Makama
Date: 5/16/2017 9:08:00 AM

Thank you so much Jo Daniel

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/8/2017 8:52:00 AM

Good write Funom...

Funom Makama
Date: 5/16/2017 9:05:00 AM

Thank you so much Charlie Smith

Probir Gupta

Date: 3/8/2017 7:24:00 AM

Nice lyric ... Much enjoyed ...

Funom Makama
Date: 5/16/2017 9:05:00 AM

Thank you so much Probir

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/8/2017 6:42:00 AM

Such beautiful lines! In your chorus did you mean to say "feel"?

Funom Makama
Date: 3/8/2017 7:13:00 AM

Yes, thank you very much for the observation, I am correcting it immediately. Thank you very much.