Blind Reaction

Paroxysm of the pupil
   Blind eye opens to dawn
Brightness quadruples
   Crimson-tangerine brawn


11/29/2019
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Wolf Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 8:29 PM
Now it's a three-bagger. I sense the profundity of this 'epic-gram!' But please don't ask me to explain it clearly! LOL. I know it's great, that's for sure. Cheers, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 8:30 PM
Thanks so much!
Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 3:19 PM
ha. I loved Caren's comment!! Ditto for me!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 8:31 PM
:) Hope your Thanksgiving was wonderful!
Roper Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 2:41 AM
nice one
Rodrigues Avatar
December 1, 2019 at 8:32 PM
Thanks, Eve!
Krutsinger Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 2:01 AM
Your contrasts are confounding to me, but I know the sageness of your seriousness, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 2:38 AM
LOL! Thank you, sweet friend!
Green Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 4:03 PM
Definitely at adverse reaction. : ) Nicely done Kim
Rodrigues Avatar
November 29, 2019 at 7:00 PM
Thank you, Chris! Blessings bright...Kim
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