Blind Lust

one who lusts blindly
for the absolute sadly-
never sees truly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 2:56 PM
This is so good Greg! May I suggest you change it to Senryu and submit it to Mick Talbot's Senryu poetry contest it's so good ;) xomo
Gaul Avatar
July 11, 2018 at 8:23 PM
So kind of you to say this Maureen. I was waivering on this one myself. I already entered a senryu in Mick's contest. I'll noodle this some more, I do respect your opinion. Not sure but thankful.
Nance Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 2:32 PM
wee said
Gaul Avatar
July 10, 2018 at 7:02 PM
Casarah, thanks for the read and kind comment.
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