Blind Faith

And the people were fascinated by the
sssa!
Lava touches water,
cools.
Water heats.
Water wraps its hands around the melting
earth, to choke it, smash it, crush it.
Reduce it to its powerless state.
Then
sssa!
Earth and water consume each other.
Water, flown apart, simply rises.
Earth must be quelled, drawn downward.  Gravity does this.
And the people only see the
sssa!
The people bring a lunch, make a day of it, camp out.
And soon, the people cook over the earth’s heat.
The sun would blister their backs, make them
fester, make them
cook like lobsters,
but the sun gave up.
And the people let their eyes blister away, just
staring
at the inner earth,
listening.
Concerned only for the coming of the
sssa!
And the elements mingled, found each other
in the earth, melting.
Then found each other again
as noxious vapors.
And the people sat devoutly as their
eyes, ears, and fingertips
melted.
Now.  There is no more
sssa!
Water has won its upward passage,
winding mistily towards a more celestial target.
The people sit.  Still.
No eyes but burn marks, still singeing outwards.
No ears to speak of, no tongues to hear.
And the people believe.
The people still hear the
sssa!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 3/24/2011 5:25:00 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured, Alix
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Date: 3/22/2011 7:17:00 AM
perfect portrayal of faith...
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Date: 3/21/2011 5:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Alix. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/30/2010 12:47:00 PM
I like the repeating line in this one. The theme is also consistent. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 5/25/2010 4:49:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Alix. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/21/2010 10:36:00 PM
very good. YOu took it pretty much the way I did too. LUv, andrea
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