Blind Deaf and Dumb

BLIND DEAF AND DUMB
I’ve always felt joy — never been without gifts and the love of family and friends. Busted blind deaf and dumb. I’ve been let in on a secret. I guess I knew they were out there, but sitting so close to me? One has bangs and curved lips, another is quiet and stern.
the kettle so cold the lukewarm water so sparse no wrappings inside
One receives a hand-me-down, another receives nothing at all. They most certainly hear the, complaint and warmth, of the surrounding environment. Opening up, tongue and lips speak.
eyes sporadically blinking and shut tight — pain unbearable 12/28/2018 Contest: Misery Sponsor: Edward Ibeh
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Ibeh Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 8:07 PM
Thanks for taking part in my contest, Kim!:-) A great double haibun! Congratulations on your win!
Rodrigues Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 8:09 PM
Thank you, Edward!
Gauthier Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 7:01 PM
Great haibun, Kim. Congrats on your well deserved high honors.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 7:09 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Kiser Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 2:06 PM
Love the, "kettle"metaphor. Best of luck in the contest.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 6:12 PM
Thank you, M.L.!
Callus Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 11:26 AM
Creative and expressive take on the misery theme, Kim. A second reading is advisable. Regards // paul
Rodrigues Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 12:37 PM
Thanks so much, Paul!
Blown Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 10:48 AM
excellente' expressione' : )
Rodrigues Avatar
December 28, 2018 at 12:37 PM
Thank you, dear Sand!
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