Sona Wilae Poet Pantoum

Blind Color

Color us blind to race
Paint our world multi-love,
Stroke your hearts beating time;
Defeating waste of compassion.

Paint our world multi-love,
Breathe her hope of his dreams
Defeating waste of compassion;
Hang jewels coast-to-coast.

Breathe her hope of his dreams,
Stripes of cheering equality
Hang jewels coast-to-coast; 
Murals stain hues of splendor.

Stripes of cheering equality
Color us blind to race
Murals stain hues of splendor
Color us blind to race.

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Akkina Downing November 19, 2017 at 9:37 PM It's beautiful Sona :)

Andrea Dietrich November 14, 2017 at 11:31 PM Oh, I love the imagery you use and how you shortened your lines. I am not a pantoum expert, but it seems to me that the last line is not supposed to repeat in the last stanza where you have used it twice. Anyway, I'm glad to meet you and hope to see you around some more!

Andrea Dietrich November 14, 2017 at 11:29 PM Thanks so much for what you said on my pantoum. I believe it lost the first contest it was entered into specifically for pantoum. Maybe I am remembering wrong. ANyway, let me check out YOURS