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Blind Color

Color us blind to race Paint our world multi-love, Stroke your hearts beating time; Defeating waste of compassion. Paint our world multi-love, Breathe her hope of his dreams Defeating waste of compassion; Hang jewels coast-to-coast. Breathe her hope of his dreams, Stripes of cheering equality Hang jewels coast-to-coast; Murals stain hues of splendor. Stripes of cheering equality Color us blind to race Murals stain hues of splendor Color us blind to race.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 11/19/2017 9:37:00 PM
It's beautiful Sona :)
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Date: 11/14/2017 11:31:00 PM
Oh, I love the imagery you use and how you shortened your lines. I am not a pantoum expert, but it seems to me that the last line is not supposed to repeat in the last stanza where you have used it twice. Anyway, I'm glad to meet you and hope to see you around some more!
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Date: 11/14/2017 11:29:00 PM
Thanks so much for what you said on my pantoum. I believe it lost the first contest it was entered into specifically for pantoum. Maybe I am remembering wrong. ANyway, let me check out YOURS
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