Blind

Let’s stare
unblinkingly at
startling visions of
beauty too grandiose
to comprehend.
Let’s look deep into
each other’s souls
and observe truths,
and not pretend.
Let’s turn our gazes
skyward, aspire to
be limitless,
unerr’d by the SUN.
Let’s envision what
was, what is, what
might be and what is
yet to become.

I once looked into
the bottom of your
heart, saw love, and
thought it a
beautiful place.
I observed it once
again and found only
the pitch darkness
of an abyss and the
unloving cold of
outer space.
‘Tis a horrible
thing when honest
eyes hear nothing
but lies.
How horrible is a
knowledge of seeing
when it benefits not
the eyes…

I look at you and
sometimes I see
love, sometimes I
see pieces,
sometimes I see
unforgiving cold
But worst of all,
sometimes I see
nothing at all and
am blind!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/29/2014 9:58:00 AM
thank you for the reply, :)
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Date: 8/13/2014 6:13:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Ochieng - I choose your first very well written free verse :) - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- P-Soup Rule: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/13/2014 7:11:00 AM
- Thank you - I love to get comment on my poems - a "poet" without comments - are like a garden without flowers :)))
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Ochieng Adipo
Date: 8/13/2014 7:08:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise! I feel welcome already. Definitely feel free to come back and check out some other pieces. I'll also read some of yours.
Date: 8/13/2014 2:07:00 AM
Also beautiful.
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Ochieng Adipo
Date: 8/13/2014 6:49:00 AM
:-)))!
Date: 8/13/2014 12:39:00 AM
WOW, Lets, look and comprehend. A fine poem, Ochieng:) ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Ochieng Adipo
Date: 8/13/2014 6:47:00 AM
Thanks Linda! Am glad you liked it. And pen name aside, my friends call me Trevor :-D.
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