Blind

The Sun shines brightly
All I see is : Ebony
I can feel the Warmth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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February 15, 2011 at 1:16 PM
This is very deep and profound, I can only imagine total darkness, I know a lady who is blind, but not from birth, so she told me she remembers, a setting sun, an azure sky and all the rest, she likes it when I describe things to her, she will smile and say, oh yes, I remember~~
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February 15, 2011 at 12:59 PM
beautiful haiku you have here, enjoyed reading this one,..p.d.
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February 15, 2011 at 10:21 AM
This is a wonderful Haiku expressing the feeling of a blind man/woman------kashinath
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