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Blind

In a calm black Darker than darkness I'm perfectly blind With ignorance to confess All there is that I can sense Is the movement of my chest I can hear and imagine Nothing besides my breath This place is unfamiliar Yet I've been here many times The same color, the same silence You'd not sense a life or dime Although the lack of light Would seem to impend doom Somehow I feel infinite hope As if it thrives in this dark room I want my eyes to open But they stay closed for unknown reason I long for a flicker of light In this black so cold, so freezing I hope and I hope for a sight to come What I'll see, I don't know All I know is I'm blind to the future And all I have for it is hope March 2010

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Date: 2/6/2011 1:24:00 PM
If we could see everything we'd go stark raving mad and suicidally sad
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Date: 4/7/2010 10:27:00 AM
This is poetry at its best, your feelings here touch me. This one I will read again..... As Always, Shar
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Date: 4/2/2010 3:11:00 AM
Great write, the content so powerful holds the readers eye and thoughts, thanks for your visit to my site Daniel
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Date: 4/1/2010 10:18:00 PM
Compelling poem, B. When the lights go out, fantasy can take over. I like the way you hold on to hope for the future even though you don't know what it will bring. And I admire the way you seem to be at peace in the darkness. That's the sign of a person who is at ease with her life. Very inspiring poem!
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Date: 4/1/2010 8:16:00 PM
well penned poem.
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Date: 4/1/2010 3:26:00 PM
Well done. Just as long as you have hope it will be allright.Nice!
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