Blessings
It rained this morning until this moment,
now the birds are singing.
A blessing!
Bird song is not much of a tune, kind of repetitive
and it could use a base accompaniment.
In fact to be honest, the birds
are kind of annoying.
Wait, it’s raining again - sweet silence
Another blessing!
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