Ndaba Sibanda Poet Rhyme

Blessing Star

Your black hair shimmered
I knew not the reason
I watched it every little season
My heart and head simmered
Your shapely body twinkled
As if never would it be wrinkled
Yet it had a little lesion
Which never ever rankled


You were my heart`s queen
Those organs of sight
Just witty and bright
They caught me off guard
An angel is all l had seen
I zoomed heavenward!

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Harry Horsman July 21, 2015 at 3:59 PM Gone back to your first poem posted here..and it is awesome , just love it....

Betty Bateson April 19, 2013 at 10:40 AM Looking up for your star.Beautiful.

Lucilla Carrillo April 12, 2013 at 11:08 AM Hi; This is the first time that I visit.Congratulations on this being featured. Great poem and you zoomed in the right direction.......Lucilla

Andrea Dietrich March 31, 2013 at 3:47 PM and congrats on this one having been featured. I see you came here not a year ago!! Ndaba Sibanda March 31, 2013 at 4:06 PM Andrea, yes...from that point it was something like a meteoric rise . This is simply courtesy to the great support rendered by this community.

Andrea Dietrich March 31, 2013 at 3:46 PM well, you had no new poetry but I went back to your first post ever and found this sweet symbolic one. I love how you zoomed heavenward for your beautiful star!

Poet Destroyer A November 11, 2012 at 6:19 PM Ndaba, Congratulations with your awesome poem on the featured spots of the week.. Take care.. ~xox~pd Ndaba Sibanda November 12, 2012 at 3:06 PM Hi Poet Destroyer. Thank you!

Carol Sunshine Brown November 6, 2012 at 6:17 AM Congratulations on your awesome poetry being featured this week Ndaba. Love, Carol Ndaba Sibanda November 6, 2012 at 8:15 AM Thanks, Carol!