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Bless the Children

Through the magic of one evening I’ll handle time within my care, protecting all the young dreamers to hold the faith and not despair Good fortune will light their being to that comforting place of peace, each step away from dire ailment as children’s illnesses decrease. The playground fresh, it’s theirs to run when morning’s daybreak lies in wait for spirit renewed through joy of health; that now, breaths flying radiate. And while sleep comes, blessed hearts at rest where prayers echo unto God's praise, minds and bodies fully restored with new wishes for life, ablaze! Poem 208 Contest: Brian Strand 21 Sept 2016 Repost

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Date: 7/8/2014 11:55:00 PM
Sweet win...PD
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Date: 7/7/2014 8:24:00 AM
A magical, sincere, and heartfelt wish for the children. I love this one!
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Date: 7/6/2014 8:19:00 AM
"The playground fresh, it’s theirs to run when morning’s daybreak lies in wait for spirit renewed through joy of health; that now, breaths flying radiate." Congrats on your win!!!
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Date: 7/5/2014 8:55:00 PM
a very tender thought for children, nette. congrats for fine win. Mohan
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Date: 7/5/2014 4:16:00 AM
Well thot of Nette for one days magic ! Congrats on win!
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Date: 7/1/2014 9:44:00 AM
Wow! This is extremely awesome my very dear friend Nette. I'm so glad, I've few time at soup this evening and stopped by here. This will go to my fave. TYSM. Remembering my lil kids on this stellar write of yours. Have a great day! Sending you many hugs and kisses! God bless! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 6/30/2014 4:51:00 AM
Ahh!! Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest.."with new wishes for life, ablaze!"If only we could have a good positive life ablaze each day..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 6/29/2014 3:59:00 PM
What a beautiful gesture that would be nette...We do something with the Make a Wish foundation in conjunction with my daughter's gymnastics team...It is a joy to see all children that are being helped...hugs Tim
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Date: 6/29/2014 2:22:00 PM
The magic flows from your pen with this glorious write... bless the children - I always do! good luck in the contest this will do well. Hugs as ever Jan xxx
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Date: 6/29/2014 2:08:00 PM
- As always: Beautiful poem Nette! (How beautiful the day would be :) - Bless the children !! - Luck in contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/29/2014 1:43:00 PM
WOW! Nette, this is simply beautiful. One of your very best writes that has touched my heart. What more worthy than a child. Beautiful peace. I believe I see a winner!
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Date: 6/29/2014 1:26:00 PM
Good write on the possibility's that life offers us Nette to to appreciate the value of keeping a positive aspect involved with children, and supporting them with a write like this..'
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