Nette Onclaud Poet Rhyme

Bless the Children

Through the magic of one evening
I’ll handle time within my care,
protecting all the young dreamers
to hold the faith and not despair 
 
Good fortune will light their being
to that comforting place of peace,
each step away from dire ailment
as children’s illnesses decrease.
 
The playground fresh, it’s theirs to run
when morning’s daybreak lies in wait
for spirit renewed through joy of health;
that now, breaths flying radiate.
 
And while sleep comes, blessed hearts at rest
where prayers echo unto God's praise,
minds and bodies fully restored
with new wishes for life, ablaze!


Poem 208 Contest: Brian Strand
21 Sept 2016 Repost

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Poet Destroyer A July 8, 2014 at 11:55 PM Sweet win...PD

Monterey Sirak July 7, 2014 at 8:24 AM A magical, sincere, and heartfelt wish for the children. I love this one!

Robert Lindley July 6, 2014 at 8:19 AM "The playground fresh, it’s theirs to run when morning’s daybreak lies in wait for spirit renewed through joy of health; that now, breaths flying radiate." Congrats on your win!!!

Mohan Chutani July 5, 2014 at 8:55 PM a very tender thought for children, nette. congrats for fine win. Mohan

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 5, 2014 at 4:16 AM Well thot of Nette for one days magic ! Congrats on win!

Len Gasun July 1, 2014 at 9:44 AM Wow! This is extremely awesome my very dear friend Nette. I'm so glad, I've few time at soup this evening and stopped by here. This will go to my fave. TYSM. Remembering my lil kids on this stellar write of yours. Have a great day! Sending you many hugs and kisses! God bless! love lots, Leonora

Sara Kendrick June 30, 2014 at 4:51 AM Ahh!! Reads like a winner to me..Way to go for the contest.."with new wishes for life, ablaze!"If only we could have a good positive life ablaze each day..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Tim Smith June 29, 2014 at 3:59 PM What a beautiful gesture that would be nette...We do something with the Make a Wish foundation in conjunction with my daughter's gymnastics team...It is a joy to see all children that are being helped...hugs Tim

Jadazzle United June 29, 2014 at 2:22 PM The magic flows from your pen with this glorious write... bless the children - I always do! good luck in the contest this will do well. Hugs as ever Jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen June 29, 2014 at 2:08 PM - As always: Beautiful poem Nette! (How beautiful the day would be :) - Bless the children !! - Luck in contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Eileen Manassian June 29, 2014 at 1:43 PM WOW! Nette, this is simply beautiful. One of your very best writes that has touched my heart. What more worthy than a child. Beautiful peace. I believe I see a winner!

Joe Maverick June 29, 2014 at 1:26 PM Good write on the possibility's that life offers us Nette to to appreciate the value of keeping a positive aspect involved with children, and supporting them with a write like this..'