Blemished

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

"Yet helping hands stay far away"- a poignant write!!

Life can get very lonely at times, but now and then we find a friend who helps us get our lives back on the right track... This emotive piece is one that I think most of us can relate to. Nicely penned, Karen.

Yes, this poem engenders the disillusionment that is life itself. Well-knitted and deserving every inch of praise~7++.

Good to see this one Karen. LINDA

Hi Karen Long time no see. A very intense and sad poem. Great Write!

Hi Karen Long time no see. A very intense and sad poem. Great Write!

this is a great capture of a sadness and longing.

powerful write indeed, my friend

Yes, each has its own flaws and its hard to breathe the reality that their certain people who doesn't get enough help. This poem speak of its reality in this life. So bold, to hear what each one need. Great write.

Very thought provoking piece. The struggle goes on for us all... Some times it can be almost over whelming. And usually only we ourselves can gives us hope and a future....

Karen quite often we feel alone not knowing that often a helping hand is just over our shoulder, very well written...David

sometimes life becomes too much and this is so well portrayed in this exquisite pen Karen ty for visiting my page hugs

I know this feeling....excellent write, Karen...Caleb

Very nice write Karen....

wonderful writing of emotions ... I love this poetry.. Brooke

your marvelous write kept me going, karen.. tugging at the heartstrings!.. huggs

Helping hands are closer than people realize, sometimes pride prevents people from asking for help.

this seems sad, I hope it is not describing your present feelings in life. So nice to see this recent post of yours, Karen. HOpe to see more.

it often seems at our darkest hour that no one is around to offer help, though they are, sometimes you just need to work through things on your own and if we fall they will help pick us back up :) I like this one! hugs

i like your work and dig this one especially, spot on feelings.....

I can truly relate to this. I think everyone has experienced this lonely feeling at some point in their lives. I love the depth in this soulful write. Another amazing poem from you, Karen! :)

Very powerful write am sure many can relate to the' helping hands' not being there when they are so needed. hugs Jan xxx

six lines that are full of impact on the reader; I have had such days as these...many thanks for your kind words on my poem :)

Strongly expressed poem. Speaking of desire, elusive wishes; perseverance is the solution. You'll be surprised how close at hand help could be! // paul