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Bleeding Rose

red streaks run along the edges of the white petals like the ones that run down her arms trickling slowly down the stem and to the floor like the tears she sheds every second of the day the red stains upon the leaves unwashed the red stains upon her fingers untouched red stained carpet and red stained cloths a jacket worn at all times a black jacket covering the scars red puddles left behind and a bleeding rose

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/20/2011 9:05:00 AM
nicely written. Your friend sounds like she has some really big issues to take care of. good luck Julie
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Date: 3/9/2011 11:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one of PoetrySoup's contest. The best to you in the finals Chessney. Love Carol
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Date: 10/5/2010 3:25:00 PM
Congrats Chessney on your win tonight in P.D.'s contest with thhis lovely poem.. enjoy with luv..
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Date: 10/5/2010 1:09:00 PM
Chessney, Congratulations and thanks for supporting my contest. I had lots of fun reading your entry and selecting this fine poem for my contest,.p.d.
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Date: 10/5/2010 12:03:00 PM
Congratulations Chessney on your win in P.D.'s contest " Any Poem Goes* Any Poem". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/29/2010 9:04:00 AM
HI, CHESSNEY, CoNGRATULATIoNS ON HAVING YOUR POEM FEATURED THIS WEEK*luv~SKAT
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Date: 9/29/2010 8:56:00 AM
Hello! Chessney, CONGRATULATIONS on your wonderful poem being featured this week. Enjoyed the selection of all the poetry on the front page. Have yourself a nice and wonderful day,..p.d."
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Date: 9/28/2010 7:23:00 PM
It reminds me of my mother and the short life that she lived. She was a rose. that never knew how to live.
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Date: 9/28/2010 6:00:00 PM
Congrats on the feature Chessney. Many cutters find poetry as an alternative coping skill. 75% female, 95% young intelligent and victims of the same people who should have been taking care of them, loving them and not abusing them. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 9/27/2010 6:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Chessney. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/27/2010 5:48:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Chessney in John Freeman's contest "Your Free Verse Precept" Love,Carol
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Date: 9/26/2010 3:01:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in John's "Free Verse" Contest, Chessney. Enjoy! Peace, Audrey
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Date: 9/26/2010 2:50:00 PM
Congrats Chessney on your featured poem this week on the soup.. a great piece to share with us all ..with luv...
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Date: 9/26/2010 12:02:00 PM
I like the way you compare this girl's life and feelings to a "bleeding rose," Chessney. Congratulations on your win in John's contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/26/2010 11:49:00 AM
Thanks Chessney for honoring my contest with your "Bleeding Rose" a heart warming sentiment. "Congratulations" Agape, Moses
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Date: 9/26/2010 10:35:00 AM
Congratulations on this fine win in the contest, chessney
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Date: 9/26/2010 10:12:00 AM
Congrats Chessney on your big win in John's contest with these great words so poignant.. enjoy sweet success this happy Sunday with luv..
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Date: 9/22/2010 11:52:00 PM
wow wonderful poem, comparing the bleeding of a rose and a girl enjoyed it :D
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