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Bleeding Hearts

~~~ Scarlet life soaks the powerful scene In melancholy whispers of praise Spoken in a prayer to God’s ear As bleeding hearts weep shyly always ~ Vibrant cherry meets the silence Blending with tears of pleasure Hope thickened moments spent in Reflections of hearts we treasure ~ Blushing rose awakens the spirit To inspiration that is almost haunting Coloring the thoughts in hues of Compassion poured out oh, so daunting ~ Brilliant burgundy breathes light Across the hearts and their yawning Insight into the feelings we shed When discovering a faithful dawning ~ Musical as crimson on a dew drenched leaf There is wisdom alive inside the dance Of a bud from this lamenting flower Who desires to flood hearts at first glance ~~~ May 8, 2021 Workshop: Inviting the Muse Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Jack Webster
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Kendrick Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 7:39 AM
Congrats on this very descriptive and expressive winner. Way to go. Sara
Goldsmith Avatar
June 11, 2021 at 8:29 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Beautiful" write and picture. Enjoy your win with blessings.................
Alex Avatar
June 11, 2021 at 5:48 AM
'There is wisdom alive inside the dance' Wow. Congratulations!
Lamoureux Avatar
May 8, 2021 at 11:40 PM
You turned your flowers into musical notes. This is inspired writing. Hugs Rick.
Seeker Avatar
May 8, 2021 at 9:35 PM
Enthralling effervescence!
Trifiatis Avatar
May 8, 2021 at 5:19 PM
Your poem is a celebration of poetic beauty, dearest Gina! Hugs xxx and Blessings
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 8, 2021 at 4:04 PM
I don’t see how this beautiful poem cannot come in as a top winner Gina! Ebullient graceful lines that plea for an emotional response. I was captivated from your first to last line. Bravo! Blessings xxoo
Edmonds  Avatar
May 8, 2021 at 9:35 AM
Absolutely beautiful Gina, each stanza describes the bleeding hearts flower so perfectly well… Blessings, Belle
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