Bleeding Heart Cry

I smile even though on the inside my soul 
does weep uncontrollably...like a infant 
torn from his mothers breast as he 
attempts to feed. No crime have I 
committed,except to try and love 
someone who never loved me. Torn into 
pieces like and building hit by a 
tornado....is my heart in peices. Tears that seem to 
fall from my eyes which have no ending. 
As I stand here on the top of this building 
contemplating my miseries ending? 
Someone save me from this pain which 
languishes within my heart beating even 
hard and faster than my own heart can 
beat...driving me to the point of no 
return, as my bleeding heart does cry in 
so much agony over someone who could 
never love me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 11/25/2012 9:59:00 AM
A useless exercise you have to someHOW? snap yourself out of it..try acting in love toward someone who needs a bit of love, kindness, often helping another get through will help you too! Light & Love
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Date: 11/2/2012 6:31:00 AM
Amazing poetry you have shared with us Jay. I have enjoyed reading it this morning. I will be back Monday to read more. I wish you a wonderful weekend full of sunshine and inspiration. Love, Carol
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