Bleed

Blood out of my seed
Light of my bloodline
Energy of my race
Extraction of my bone drill
Dries six feet in my tomb
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Fraser Avatar
May 25, 2010 at 11:24 AM
Many congratulations Aminkeng with this Dark piece in Jared's contest >> James
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May 20, 2010 at 8:57 PM
Powerful poem with vivid imagery. Congratulations on your win in Jared's contest. Keep on writing. Wishing you ongoing success. Karen
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May 20, 2010 at 2:23 PM
Congratulations on your HM with this little acrostic! Luv, andrea
Brown Avatar
May 20, 2010 at 10:44 AM
Congratulations on your win in Jared's contest Aminkeng. Love,Carol
Tres Avatar
July 18, 2009 at 10:58 PM
this poem is like this B -----D L-------E E-------E E ----- L D-------B
Ragusca Avatar
July 16, 2009 at 2:07 AM
Very dark i love it are styles are kinda the same check some of mine out i think you might like them
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