Beautiful Scars Poet Rhyme

Blazing Intensity

Like a pin prick to my heart you saturate me in veneration,
          through my delicate crimson veins you arouse my propensity-
    For you will always encompass me with mused inspiration.
            As I long for love’s hunger, you satisfy my famished starvation.
 I never knew passion’s fire could ignite with such blazing intensity.




June 14, 2018

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Susan Gentry June 21, 2018 at 5:03 PM Congratulations on your top win with this awesome 'hot' poem, 5 lines. Well written!

Andrea Dietrich June 19, 2018 at 3:19 PM Fantastic final line, Laura Loo. Congrats in the contest.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart June 18, 2018 at 9:05 AM Hot stuff. Congratulations on your top win! xomo :)

Frederic Parker June 17, 2018 at 4:20 PM Congratulations Laura on your placement for this passion-filled love poem

Anne-Lise Andresen June 17, 2018 at 12:36 PM - I visit your poem Laura, with congratulations and a hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues June 17, 2018 at 10:33 AM Almost like a drug...your love! Congrats on first place, dear Luloo!

Paris-Maree Boreham June 17, 2018 at 8:21 AM Congratulations Laura, This is a great poem! Kindest Regards Paris-Maree

Roy Pett June 17, 2018 at 7:02 AM Congratulations on your well deserved win Laura, beautifully written, a joy to read. :))

Silent One June 17, 2018 at 6:16 AM DAmn... Sensual five lines Lulloo.. Great rhymes.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..