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Blazing Intensity

Like a pin prick to my heart you saturate me in veneration, through my delicate crimson veins you arouse my propensity- For you will always encompass me with mused inspiration. As I long for love’s hunger, you satisfy my famished starvation. I never knew passion’s fire could ignite with such blazing intensity. June 14, 2018

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Date: 6/21/2018 5:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your top win with this awesome 'hot' poem, 5 lines. Well written!
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Date: 6/19/2018 3:19:00 PM
Fantastic final line, Laura Loo. Congrats in the contest.
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Date: 6/18/2018 9:05:00 AM
Hot stuff. Congratulations on your top win! xomo :)
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Date: 6/17/2018 4:20:00 PM
Congratulations Laura on your placement for this passion-filled love poem
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Date: 6/17/2018 12:36:00 PM
- I visit your poem Laura, with congratulations and a hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/17/2018 10:33:00 AM
Almost like a drug...your love! Congrats on first place, dear Luloo!
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Date: 6/17/2018 8:21:00 AM
Congratulations Laura, This is a great poem! Kindest Regards Paris-Maree
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Date: 6/17/2018 7:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Laura, beautifully written, a joy to read. :))
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Date: 6/17/2018 6:16:00 AM
DAmn... Sensual five lines Lulloo.. Great rhymes.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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