Blazing As Sunset

Blazing as sunset,
they grope as houses on dense-leafed cliffs
reflecting their image
in the motionless lake...
shouldn't they welcome Winter?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 10/22/2012 3:33:00 PM
a very interesting one. Love the image in it. I just love reading tankas. Hope you are doing well, Andrew.
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Date: 10/19/2012 7:57:00 AM
Thanking you today for your comments on my writing Andrew. I hope you have a very pleasant weekend and I wish to see more of your work next week. Love, Carol XXXX
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