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Blaster

Tidal pull, tsunami voices !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Push my spirit down Honking noises Distorted distance Anger flows Confusion grows Sadness creeps Upon my bed Dry eyes Sprinkle light salt Across my pillow... !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Silent screams Under twinkling stars!

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Eamon Duffin

Date: 12/17/2010 7:35:00 AM

Hi Doris. Great to be back in touch with you. Very busy with the music so not a great deal of time. Thanks for your kind comments. Sad, sad piece this, but so well written. Anger and sadness make poor bedfellows. The end really works well. it dragged me back to the start to read again. oh hell I know what I mean. Just accept my congratulations on a well crafted piece. Luck, peace and happiness to you and yours. Eamon

James Peranteau

Date: 12/15/2010 2:44:00 PM

I feel this heavy dear poet, If ya only new ! Great write Doris...I'll be sharing this if'n ya don't mind with my sister who lived this ! much love, james

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/15/2010 2:09:00 PM

Sounds so sad....I hope just a write and not how you are really feeling..Mom

Charles Melody Lightning Ink

Date: 12/15/2010 9:03:00 AM

MARVELOUS WRITE, ENJOYED GREATLY. LOVE, MELODY MAKER.PHYLLIS BABCOCK DID TWO POEMS FOR HAPPY ME.

Suresh Iyer

Date: 12/15/2010 8:57:00 AM

Loved your poem Thanks for your generous support during the year 2010 Looking forward to 2011 My Best Wishes to you Suresh Iyer, India