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Blaster

Tidal pull, tsunami voices
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Push my spirit down
Honking noises
Distorted distance
Anger flows
Confusion grows
Sadness creeps
Upon my bed
Dry eyes
Sprinkle light salt
Across my pillow...
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Silent screams
Under twinkling stars!

angstfree verse

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Eamon Duffin

December 17, 2010 at 7:35 AM

Hi Doris. Great to be back in touch with you. Very busy with the music so not a great deal of time. Thanks for your kind comments. Sad, sad piece this, but so well written. Anger and sadness make poor bedfellows. The end really works well. it dragged me back to the start to read again. oh hell I know what I mean. Just accept my congratulations on a well crafted piece. Luck, peace and happiness to you and yours. Eamon

James Peranteau

December 15, 2010 at 2:44 PM

I feel this heavy dear poet, If ya only new ! Great write Doris...I'll be sharing this if'n ya don't mind with my sister who lived this ! much love, james